It all began in 1912 ...
There lived a man named Jack he was a rich man.One day Jack decided to go on holiday on the Titanic ship.On the ship he meet a beautiful girl named Rose they were a couple.
That night something was wrong the ship was sailing toward the iceberg .The ship stopped then it started to lean one way everyone aboard was shocked they didn't expect it to happen then it started to sink Rose and Jack were scared because they didn't want to end their relationship because they just meet they were happy to be together Rose and Jack tried to help People aboard but they couldn't .The boat came to rescue the people but some people die as the water rised.
The water come high and the boat tipped Rose and Jack fell off the ship and everyone else
Solution
The water was freezing cold Jack got a wood and told Rose to hope on it while Jack freeze to death and and the people aboard .The boat came to see if there were any survivors the only survivor was Rose she was saved Jack and the people died and the boat sank to the bottom of the water the end.
6 comments:
Maopa well done great work!!!!! keep it up
Good morning Maopa,I really like the way you wrote your story about how titanic began.I really liked the way you used capital letters and full stops.That was good work keep it up!!!!
Maopa, well done on your writing. You might be a writer one day.I really liked the way you have put all of your full stops in the right place.
Hi Maopa, I like the way you made it so long, with good punctuation in this story. Well done!!
Great work!!keep it up!
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