Wednesday 28 March 2012

The lost violin

Thursday 8 March.




WALT write a  narrative story based on our artwork.



The Lost Violin
Along time ago  in a island  there lived a handsome boy his name was William and he had a pet called Harmony.  They lived in a small village  called Jamaica. William was bored so he decided to watch Ben 10  when suddenly a familiar Add came on channel 2 It said, ‘Hi William I am Nathan I have a Job for you. I  want you to go in the  woods to find the missing violin, ‘.So off they went to search for the lost violin.


When they got there they heard an  unusual sound coming out of the ground William quickly dashed to the opposite side of the corner .It started to rain and get gloomy also   breezy  around them they  could hear  the wolf howling in a angry voice.The wolves    could smell the moist blood and they knew people were there so the pirates sent them to go hunt for them  they sniffed  and sniffed  and found William  and Harmony they  took him and the pet  by their sharp , pointy teeth and  took them to the castle they showed the pirate and he looked at  them  and told him to lock them in  the cage.They left  without the map because the pirate was so excited he couldn't wait.


They were stuck in the cage utili  Harmony  reached his tail out of the corner and locked the map around his tail they open the map and inside was a key  to  unlock the cage and they were  finally free.They rushed out of the castle  and followed the map.Then they saw the pirate in a frown because he knew he forgot the map he ran back to the castle and realised they escaped this is worst day ever he yelled.They kept on going on until they found the violin.They found the missing violin and rushed home to the t.v they clicked channel 2  and typed in violin he came on the screen again he told them to  put it threw the screen but he said no he then  thought about it and he did it. It  went threw the screen but William thought it was going to smash but it didn't he was surprised and then the adventure was exstapillshed.     

The End By Maopa.                                                                                                              


Thursday 1 March 2012

All About Me

Hi my name is Maopa. I have black hair and brown smooth skin. I like to go shopping and go on computer. I have 3 brothers and 4 sisters.I like to eat chocolate and ice- cream.My mum is Maori and my dad is Tongan. My friends are Malia, Mehi and Charday. I go to Tamaki Primary school and I am in Room 7. My teacher is Miss Aireen. She is spectacular and Miss Kelly is our teacher aide. 

My learning  goal for this year is learn different maths strategies to solve challenging maths problems.

I am 9 years old. My brother enjoys reading as well as my sister Lucy. I enjoy looking after my sister Treasa. My brother Matthais gets lots of cool baby things.The best teachers are Miss Kyla and Miss Aireen. Miss Aireen is Samoan miss Kyla is Maori.


When I grow up I want to be a policewomen so I can help people and solve their  problems and give them a good life. 

At school I play with Lavania and Evelyn because they are kind and friendly.My favourite sport is touch, rugby and also soccer.